For this blog assignment, describe your object along with the Concrete poem itself.
"Mrs. Perkins' Locket"
to keep a joyful heart
leave it open
so love can creep in
when I least expect it
and leak out
when I am not paying
attention.
It soothes me
in dark days;
the times I don't want
to forget my hurt.
Instead I focus
on the future,
and love
that will surely
come my way
if I let it.
My object is my favorite shirt,
ReplyDeleteIt keeps me comfortable, It keeps me safe and it lets me sleep when I am awake.
It's grey and blue and it's always true when I need
something to get me through.
nice!
DeleteIphone skateboard is something i love.
ReplyDeleteThe skateboard is the only thing that makes me,me.
Skateboarding is how i spend my free time it reminds me of my uncle.
Skateboarding is the only way i relate to him.
The Iphone skateboard is something we both use daily.
skateboarding is my life.
My concrete poem is about my red ipod touch
ReplyDeleteMy ipod is speacial it keep me company,
when the days are long it keeps me strong.
When i get bored I play on it,
it is old even growing so mold.
I droped it and broke the screen somethimes it helps me dream.
I keep it clean so it looks nice,i have a picture of some dice.
I always take it everywere to not be bored.
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Delete"Victoria secret Shimmer and Shine Pink body perfume."
ReplyDeleteIt smells good and
it has glitter stuff inside
it Victoria secrets has it
in their store I love it so
because it reminds me my
friends.
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ReplyDeleteLol Ariela!! I enjoy your poem:)
DeleteYou and Shakiya got the same tweezers lol !
Delete- i love you Ariela<3
DeleteMy bear .
ReplyDeleteMy bear is not ordinary
It's very cool and doesn't drool
My bear is extraordinary
He or she I wish we could see
He's big and fat I should buy him a hat
He's funny he's sweet
I think he's very neat
My beaar is awesome
Too bad last summer I lost him
"my silver heart necklace."
ReplyDeleteThis is a part of my heart
and will stay with me forever.
fitting like a glove & given by my love,
i will keep it forever endeavor.<3
"my half dollar"
ReplyDeleteThis coin is currencey I will never spend.
My grandpa's life i wish could expand.
I love that coin so much.
I hold in my hand my grandpas touch.
That coin shines brighter that no other.
His big heart began ti smother.
He pasted his last breath and layed there still.
It was cancer lurking for the kill.
Chris!, this poem almost made me cry!, I'm sorry for what have happened. When my older sister was born, she was a premature baby. She was born too early and my parents were scared if she was not going to make it, but I was glad she is alive and I hope you are okay after you wrote this. This poem is really touching.
DeleteThe color purple
ReplyDeleteis special
the color purple
keeps me happy
the color purple
is the best.
my object is a Rubik's cube
ReplyDeleteThis requires a complex mind because of its bind
for those with a lesser brain it will be a pain
the center will never move so you'll wish you had a splinter
Mister Rubik what was in your head when you lied down in your bed.
'' My Cell Phone''
ReplyDeleteim a cell phone i keep all your contacts
you have alot of mcdreamy pictures
im a very important phone you need to keep up with
my cell phone is really important to me if i lost it
i would go really mad it keep happy all the time
my phone has a facebook bookmark i love this phone alot
my phone has a blue case on its back i carrry it every were
i just love my phone alot
the first time i got on you i lost balence and fell,
ReplyDeletei broke my wrist.
i swore i would never get on you again!
i lied.
a month later i was right back on you,
you have black words written on you bright green deck.
oh, the years are showing on you.
your bright green has faded to a dull color.
your trucks have been rusted and replaced.
your old self is not to be riddin again.
when i look on the wall where you sit retired i think back,
to all the good and bad times,
all the cops that was called because of me riding you.
all the cuts and bruise's.
most of all the number 1 thing i love about you is........
you brought me to my best friend!
my guess it is a skateboard
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ReplyDeleteyou said it most be right ?
DeleteJAWAN grammer check please and thank you lol.
Delete"My Louis Vuitton Clutch"
ReplyDeleteThis item holds my life
with it I know I'm right
never will we ever be apart
because you will always have a special place in my heart
I love this clutch will all my might
If I loose it I'll be in a fright
I love you Louis you're the one
I guess I'll change my last name to Vuitton
my poem is about you
stay with me so I know it's true
with you I'll never be blue
I guess we now say I do!
this was really good (:
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DeleteI am a rectangle.
ReplyDeleteI am used for putting money in.
I am also used for putting credit cards in.
I have a nose.
Two eyes and some whiskers.
I also have a big pink bow on the right side.
Lots of big and little kids love me.
I am very valueable.
My object is my Hello Kitty wallet .
OMG I L O V E Hello Kitty Measha ! I like your poem :)
Deletethanks , I love hellooo kitty too (:
DeleteMy object is my Teddy Bear,
ReplyDeleteMy bear is not like all the other bears
it's different it's just for me and me only
I love it and I know for sure he loves me to
I have had it since I was 7
It was given to me by someone speacial and that I love
My grandma
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww(:
DeleteAwwww How Sweet:)
Delete'My Ring'
ReplyDeleteSuch A Small Object...
Means A Lot To Me,
Brings Many Memories To Me
Warms My Heart At The Thought Of Each Moment.
aww soo sweet (:
DeleteWe strive for progress
ReplyDeletenot perfection.You push
me to keep going even
know want to stop.
You're chlorine blue like
the water in a pool.
Motivation gets us there
so we choose to stay.
Track is our life and
everything else is just
a detail.
My object is my track spikes :)
awww tyeisha ....
DeleteTrack you do THAT!
DeleteMy bracelets.
ReplyDeleteYou see those bracelets she
always wears?
They hide something big,
in her heart.
She loves them,
'cause some of them was to
her by her best friends.
They have a every special,
memorize to her,
they some times say thing;
to make her
know she's not alone.
she likes how they glow in the dark.
she will keep them for ever,
not because they hide something big,
because of the memorizes,
the past, the present, the future.
Some times when she's out in the park;
playing softball,
she takes them off,
so nothing can happen to them.
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ReplyDeleteMangos can be sweet,tangy, or sour.
ReplyDeleteIt seems like yesterday I was in the Philippines
eating one. I remember being at my grandma's house
with my family. We were outside looking around, then
my dad shows my two sisters and I a mango tree which
was very high. My mother told us a story that either
her or her brothers had to climb up the tree to get some.
As we were walking, my dad found one on the ground, so
we decided to take a picture of it. When we got in the house, there were some sitting on the table on a plate. There's so many ways to eat one. Mangos come
in different colors and sizes.
Mangos continued
ReplyDeleteMangos can be desserts.
One time,we were in the hotel where we stay at
It was in the afternoon before we have lunch,
when my two sister and I were eating ice cream
out of the tub.
There was mango ice cream and two other flavors.
While we were eating, my little sister got some
ice cream all over her hands and her mouth which
was very funny.
Mangos can be an ice candy, where you take the inside
of it, put it in a ziploc bag, freeze it then eat it
on a hot day. You can also to other fruits too.
i love your poem alot
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