Traditionally, concrete poems are about a special object. The text of the poem fills in the outline of the object's shape.
For this blog assignment, add a comment where you describe your object along with the Concrete poem itself.
"Mrs. Perkins' Locket"
This locket reminds me
to keep a joyful heart
leave it open
so love can creep in
when I least expect it
and leak out
when I am not paying
attention.
It soothes me
in dark days;
the times I don't want
to forget my hurt.
Instead I focus
on the future,
and love
that will surely
come my way
if I let it.
For this blog assignment, add a comment where you describe your object along with the Concrete poem itself.
"Mrs. Perkins' Locket"
to keep a joyful heart
leave it open
so love can creep in
when I least expect it
and leak out
when I am not paying
attention.
It soothes me
in dark days;
the times I don't want
to forget my hurt.
Instead I focus
on the future,
and love
that will surely
come my way
if I let it.
He took that lure and tossed it in the pond,
ReplyDeleterealed that spool as a bass made that bond.
Killed that pole just getting him to the bank,
stood with disbelief as that fish yanked;
he slapped, he pounded, i screamed and yelped.
Cant believe it, but i may need help,
that lined popped so i started to weap,
couldnt believe i was still in this heat.
I screamed and yelled in disbelief,
i guess that bass got the best of me.
I would ride it all day
ReplyDeleteand sometimes it would just make me say,
I wish I could make it so much faster
but I know it would be a huge disaster
MY RACING LAWNMOWER
Together at last '
ReplyDeleteThe first time I saw you, I smiled
So many memories in just one day
We rode on rides just you and I
Smiles, hugs, and kisses in just one day
Just three words, two people and one meaning
You and I would never forget
How much we spent together in just one day
We held hands like a couple
Even though we weren't together
We exchanged things at the end of the day
A brown and black dog for me
A red bracelet for you
You got along with my relative so well
You made her smile and laugh like she was me
You promised to never leave again
Even if we weren't together
It was the end of the day
At last it was time to say goodbye
You asked a question before we said goodbye
"Lets be together again?"
Smile on each other faces was priceless
At last the answer was "yes"
A kiss before saying goodbye
Laugh together like a couple
Together at last for on and on till we die.
Excellent, Marybel :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Mrs. Perkins! :D
DeleteSomething Heavenly
ReplyDeleteMy grandmother gave me something special.
This is why I tell you my tale.
I loved it like no other.
I loved as much as I love my mother.
I was young and irresponsible.
That is why I thought it was impossible.
I lost it a few days after I got it.
I was a little happy because I hadn't bought it.
So every time something gets lost.
I will never forget the lovely cross.
The object was a necklace with a cross.
DeleteI play all day and night
ReplyDeleteCan't get it out of my sight
Beating everyone I can
Is my master plan
I dunk with Lebron,
Dish with Chris,
And hit a clutch three pointer
With a flip of Kobe's wrist
I play all day and night
Can't get it out of my sight
NBA 2k12 Online
The number Twenty-Three
ReplyDeleteThis is not what I want to be
I planed in my life to go beyond sight
And be who I want to be
The present that fell from the sky
That I try to use it everyday of my life
Helped me obtain victory
Befor, my life had no sourse
And had no remorse
But this ball in my hand protected me from worst
The game I play, the game I love
The game that often hurts
On good days and bad days I put my motto first
Good, Better, Best
Never let it rest
Untill your good gets better
And you better gets best
By keep pushing, fighting, chacing my dream
I will reach my goal and be better than....
The number Twenty-Three
For some reason I never forget you.
ReplyDeleteYou always come first in my day.
It's something I do without thinking.
I guess just out of habit.
My wrist things. :|
DeleteYou bring joy to my ears
ReplyDeleteYou bring joy to my heart.
You fill the void when im lost
Your rythem is of many
Your voices can bring tears
But Your Beats can bring Cheers
Without Music , oh it brings me fear
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ReplyDeleteas the day goes on i drift of to sleep,while laying in the room above my sheets,as i try to enter my slumber,i keep awaking myself know the day was a bumer,may 30 the day it happen i cant forget this day a terrable day of sadness,as u look down upon me my sister and i will never forget what u left with us,ur heart but leaving ours crushed,knowing that it was your time to go home, my sister and i know were not alone.
ReplyDelete"The Kid and His Skateboard"
ReplyDeleteWhen all was stressful he could always turn
To that wonderful thing that he had learned
He had learned to ride on a board with wheels
This awesome experience almost gave him chills
He finally found a place where he belonged
It made all of his problems turn and be gone
"Gatorade"
ReplyDeleteGatorade i drink that
good tastes like juice
it does better than water
hydrates better and gives a peformance
only the greats drink
only cause of the great taste
gatorade is a chapion drink
Wolfs United
ReplyDeleteWolfs are united
they stand and run together
they all help protect
and hunt for the pack
they all help protect the young
they'll stand by each other
they are a pack
Love.....
ReplyDeleteLove Me Without
Fear
Trust Me Without
Wandering
Love Me Without
Restrictions
Want Me Without
Demands
Except Me How I Am
LOVE
Xbox
ReplyDeleteIts there when I'm angry.
Its there when I'm bored or sad.
Its there when I'm happy.
When I'm happy it loves to pall around.
As we race around the world.
When I'm sad it cheers me up.
As we enjoy great movies.
When I'm angry it doesn't mind me blowing off steam
As we blow off heads.
When I'm bored It's there.
That's all I have to say.
She has looks like a goddess
ReplyDeleteand wide in the hips,she's a really sharp lady
also makes you look really nice and fit,
she may even take your boyfriend out with a CLIP!
she doesn't judge, but she may have people holding a grudge;
looks are everything to the lady that shows no love. <3
My concrete object is: a pair of TWEEZERS in the shape of a lady
it has a beautiful essence
ReplyDeletea scent that is so fresh and pure
It makes you wonder and lure
I don't know what it is
maybe it's the simple design
You definitely wouldn't decline
Concrete Object is my Marc Jacobs Daisy perfume
I first saw your hands i couldn't imagine it gold less
ReplyDeleteEver since you said no that memory will go
on and on like a broken record playing the saddest love song
one chance would be like the most amazing dance of romance
Concrete Object is A women