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Wednesday, April 18, 2012

4. Lyric Poetry - Word Choice (Hughes & Angelou)

Lyric poetry means the subject of the poem will be personal and more informal.  The word choice (diction) of the poem will be very specific to the mood of the speaker.

Langston Hughes and Maya Angelou are two poets that specialize in creating mood through their distinct word choice. 

Learn more about these two poets by searching them on http://www.shmoop.com/.

Read the poems below.  Think of vivid words or figurative language (alliteration, metaphors, similes, hyperbole, etc.) to fill in the blanks.  Once you have a complete poem, COMMENT with your new version of one or both of these poems.


"April Rain Song"
by Langston Hughes


Let the rain kiss you
Let the rain __________ on your head with
_______ drops
Let the rain sing a _______________
The rain makes ______________ on the sidewalk
The rain makes ______________ in the gutter
The rain plays __________ __________ on our
roof at night
And I love the rain.



This poem by Maya Angelou describes the power of long-forgotten memories.


"When You Come"

When you come to me, unbidden
beckoning me
to ______________ rooms,

where memories lie,

offering me, as to a child, an attic,
gatherings of days too few,
baubles of stolen kisses,
trinkets of __________  ________,
trunks of _______ ___________,

I CRY.

25 comments:

  1. Let the rain kiss you
    Let the rain poor on your head with
    every drops
    Let the rain sing a song to you
    The rain makes puddles on the sidewalk
    The rain makes noise in the gutter
    The rain plays to get inside on our
    roof at night
    And I love the rain.

    ReplyDelete
  2. Let the rain kiss you
    Let the rain bang on your head with lyrical drops
    Let the rain sing a melody
    The rain makes a move on the sidewalk
    The rain makes a tune in the gutter
    The rain plays drops and scatter on our
    roof at night
    And I love the rain.

    When you come to me, unbidden
    beckoning me
    to grateful rooms,

    where memories lie,

    offering me, as to a child, an attic,
    gatherings of days too few,
    baubles of stolen kisses,
    trinkets of soft lullaby's,
    trunks of chocolate roses,

    I CRY.

    ReplyDelete
  3. Let the rain kiss you
    Let the rain drain on your head with
    huge drops
    Let the rain sing a lyric
    The rain makes puddles on the sidewalk
    The rain makes a rythm in the gutter
    The rain plays drop tag on our
    roof at night
    And I love the rain.

    ReplyDelete
  4. "When You Come"

    When you come to me, unbidden
    beckoning me
    to the rooms,

    where memories lie,

    offering me, as to a child, an attic,
    gatherings of days too few,
    baubles of stolen kisses,
    trinkets of pictures that fade,
    trunks of everything i used in my days,

    I CRY.

    ReplyDelete
  5. Let the rain kiss you
    Let the rain hit on your head with
    love drops
    Let the rain sing a lullaby
    The rain makes pictures on the sidewalk
    The rain makes slashes in the gutter
    The rain plays rain music on our
    roof at night
    And I love the rain

    ReplyDelete
  6. Let the rain kiss you
    Let the rain fall on your head with
    cool drops
    Let the rain sing a song
    The rain makes mirrors on the sidewalk
    The rain makes floods in the gutter
    The rain plays soothing sounds on our
    roof at night
    And I love the rain.

    ReplyDelete
  7. "When You Come"

    When you come to me, unbidden
    beckoning me
    to angry rooms,

    where memories lie,

    offering me, as to a child, an attic,
    gatherings of days too few,
    baubles of stolen kisses,
    trinkets of hurt and pain,
    trunks of never forgotten things,
    I CRY.

    ReplyDelete
  8. "When You Come"

    When you come to me, unbidden
    beckoning me
    to clean rooms,

    where memories lie,

    offering me, as to a child, an attic,
    gatherings of days too few,
    baubles of stolen kisses,
    trinkets of loving hugs,
    trunks of hard smacks,

    ReplyDelete
  9. Let the rain kiss you
    Let the rain kiss on your head with
    water drops
    Let the rain sing a song
    The rain makes noise on the sidewalk
    The rain makes water in the gutter
    The rain plays soft music on our
    roof at night
    And I love the rain.

    ReplyDelete
  10. "When You Come"

    When you come to me, unbidden
    beckoning me
    to the love room,

    where memories lie,

    offering me, as to a child, an attic,
    gatherings of days too few,
    baubles of stolen kisses,
    trinkets of pictures in my mind,
    trunks of twine,

    ReplyDelete
  11. "When You Come"

    When you come to me, unbidden
    beckoning me
    to our rooms,

    where memories lie,

    offering me, as to a child, an attic,
    gatherings of days too few,
    baubles of stolen kisses,
    trinkets of my neck,
    trunks of on my car,

    ReplyDelete
  12. Let the rain kiss you
    Let the rain drip__________ on your head with
    __water_____ drops
    Let the rain sing a _song______________
    The rain makes _noise_____________ on the sidewalk
    The rain makes _water_____________ in the gutter
    The rain plays ___soft_______ ___music_______ on our
    roof at night
    And I love the rain.

    ReplyDelete
  13. Let the rain kiss you
    Let the rain fall on your head with
    cold drops
    Let the rain sing a song
    The rain makes puddle on the sidewalk
    The rain makes rivers in the gutter
    The rain plays on our
    roof at night
    And I love the rain.

    ReplyDelete
  14. When you come to me, unbidden
    beckoning me
    to empty rooms,

    where memories lie,

    offering me, as to a child, an attic,
    gatherings of days too few,
    baubles of stolen kisses,
    trinkets of sad memories,
    trunks of regret,

    I CRY.

    ReplyDelete
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    ReplyDelete
  16. "When You Come"

    When you come to me, unbidden
    beckoning me
    to dark rooms,

    where memories lie,

    offering me, as to a child, an attic,
    gatherings of days too few,
    baubles of stolen kisses,
    trinkets of terrible sorrows,
    trunks of great longing,

    I CRY

    ReplyDelete
  17. "When You Come"

    When you come to me, unbidden
    beckoning me
    to blistering rooms,

    where memories lie,

    offering me, as to a child, an attic,
    gatherings of days too few,
    baubles of stolen kisses,
    trinkets of swallowed dreams,
    trunks of dredfull passion,

    I CRY.

    ReplyDelete
  18. Let the rain kiss you
    Let the rain poor on your head with
    love drops
    Let the rain sing a song
    The rain makes hearts on the sidewalk
    The rain makes light in the gutter
    The rain plays all night on our
    roof at night
    And I love the rain.

    ReplyDelete
  19. Let the rain kiss you
    Let the rain drip on your head with
    soft drops
    Let the rain sing a lullaby
    The rain makes heartbeat on the sidewalk
    The rain makes love in the gutter
    The rain plays a rhyme scheme on our
    roof at night
    And I love the rain

    ReplyDelete
  20. When you come to me, unbidden
    beckoning me
    to those rooms,

    where memories lie,

    offering me, as to a child, an attic,
    gatherings of days too few,
    baubles of stolen kisses,
    trinkets of gold & silver,
    trunks of missing peaces,

    ReplyDelete
  21. Let the rain touch you
    Let the rain fall on your head with
    soft drops
    Let the rain sing a song
    The rain makes pictures on the sidewalk
    The rain makes noise in the gutter
    The rain plays peaceful songs on our
    roof at night
    And I love the rain.

    ReplyDelete
  22. When You Come"

    When you come to me, unbidden
    beckoning me
    to our beautiful rooms,

    where memories lie,

    offering me, as to a child, an attic,
    gatherings of days too few,
    baubles of stolen kisses,
    trinkets of wonderful plays,
    trunks of blood,sweat, tears,

    I CRY.

    ReplyDelete
  23. Let the rain kiss you
    Let the rain fall on your head with
    sudden drops
    Let the rain sing a song to you.
    The rain makes wet prints on the sidewalk
    The rain makes weird sounds in the gutter
    The rain plays a jammin' song on our
    roof at night
    And I love the rain.

    ReplyDelete
  24. Let the rain kiss you
    Let the rain drizzle on your head with
    soft drops
    Let the rain sing a wonderful melody
    The rain makes puddles on the sidewalk
    The rain makes a flood in the gutter
    The rain plays interesting noises on our
    roof at night
    And I love the rain.

    ReplyDelete

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